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Friday 26 August 2016

Persuasive Writing - It's Okay to be Different

It’s Okay to be Different
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In my opinion being different is okay and that we should show who we really are
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My most important reason is that people should not be embarrassed about being different, because being different is normal and that you shouldn’t try to be like everybody else. I think that when you are different it shows that you are unique and it makes you an interesting person out of other people.
For example, what if someone wanted to be exactly like you when they can’t, when they try to do what you do, when they try to think, see, feel what you feel, but they can’t. Because they are somebody with their own things, feelings, thoughts that nobody can do but you, because you are the only you.
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It’s the same with twins, they may look the same, and could probably think the same, but what about  the other things. Twins can be the complete opposite of each other that they might not even look same, or  like what the other likes. Because they’re different. Some twins actually hate  each  other for being the same, they try so hard to be different that they might even do something they won’t think the other would imagine. Now, just imagine that but all around the world. You will think, feel, do, change like everybody else, so much that everybody hates each other because if one person is angry, everybody is angry for the same reason.
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If a number, letter, character, species or universe is different, then imagine that you are one of those things. In one of those 5 subjects I gave you, there are countless things that you could’ve possibly been. Like a planet out of a trillion or a number out of various one’s in other cultures. See, you could mean the same thing but be completely different, so different that others would want to learn about you.    
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I strongly believe that when somebody else is different or trying to be like you then they really should just be themselves, because not everyone want’s to be
the boring and most predictable person, that’s just a disappointing way to describe life as being interesting.
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What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing? I like it, it focuses mainly on what I’m trying to debate and it makes the statement, opinions, reasons and examples stand out.

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WALT write a persuasive writing about why it's okay to be different.

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