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Monday 9 March 2015

Im Bad Jelly The Witch ! Creators Lj , Huriata 'The Night Of Deja Vu'

On ‘The Night of Deja Vu’ when good things or bad things happened to witches and wizards in the dreams of people.Me ‘Bad Jelly The Witch’ was out and about jumping around when I saw two children walking up my mountain, and I made a decision to kidnap the children so I made my move as I had my hand out and ordered to have a sack with a spell of warmth from the inside. I wanted the children to be my dinner for ‘The Night of Deja Vu’ so I had a plan to cook fresh child-Vuw stew from my beasts tongue who awaits me in my castle,I call her Doom,the castle of doom! I call her Sally as well. I stepped forward “ Oh, hello child, what are doing in this cold weather” It looked as if they needed warmth. “Child, hop into this sack, it is very warm and I shall then take you down the mountain.” they smiled and went on in  “ah hahaha you little children fell right into my trap!”.They tried to get out but they were stuck inside the sack ,so now all I have to  do is get back to my castle, the castle of doom! or just Sally,whatever and cook’em up”Okay Sally dinner will be ready in ten minutes!” and this is what the response was “Aarrrhgg!” I think that was a good sign, as she threw a rock at me, hehehe.
“okey dokey I’ll be in the kitchen, the kitchen of doom! or Sallys kitchen.” I skipped along and my castle of doom! threw a rock at me ,again “So you want a giant rock, a roasted giant rock you said!” “Aarrrhgg!” “ Sally said.I was in a squashed position as I groaned in a very painful voice as I went to get a bandage for my back in the medic room,or shall I say the medic room of doom! or Sally’s medical room.So  I left the sack with my trust-worthy servent with ten eyes, but I forgot his name, thats all I know of him and went in the kitchen, the kitchen of doom! or either way sally’s kitchen. Meanwhile I was cooking up my vegetables in the stew. I had Croockly, Plumpkin, abit of frogs breath, mud and grass then I added all my seasonings such as, mixed ferbs and hair, nice splotchy spice and a touch Dragons fire tooth which was roasted on the grizzly grill . Then I came out of the kitchen, the kitchen of doom!, or as everybodys knows, Sally’s kitchen and I went to my trustworthy servant and saw that there was nothing the sack s. I yelled and screamed and threw a giant rock at the wall of doom! I grabbed my broomstick the broomstick of doom! and flew out of my castle to find those children. I then saw the children but they ran and I was not able to catch em as they left the territory I was not able to leave so this is the last they’ll ever see me.  

5 comments:

  1. Hey Huriata and Lj I am amazed in your story and i think you should create a presentation and draw some pictures to make the readers Image a picture in there head. And did you know i made a story and i published it at GI Library and people loved it i Hope that you Keep Up this Wonderful and Amazing Work Huriata and LJ :>

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  2. Hi Huri and Lj
    I liked your story too. I liked how you emphasized some words like they do in the movies. I like Paris' suggestion that you create a picture in their heads. I would suggest that you describe things For example: The castle was huge. It was made of dark grey bricks with lots of darkened windows. Inside the castle, the walls were damp and wet because no sunlight ever got in. It smelled fowl like wet dog. Love your work guys. Great job.

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  3. no , the castled was very colourful with shades of grey,black,purple,blue and lots of cold colours and the moutain looked like hills with sharp ends all over.

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